Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry. Show all posts

Friday, September 15, 2017

Original Poem: Wild Spaces

Wild Spaces by Larissa Banitt
In the trunk of my used, gold car
an ottoman purchase on clearance
sits among camping supplies.
Day has receded to the deep blue of twilight,
not quite yielded to night’s velvet fingers.
The first stars are peaking down
despite the lights from the city.
Up on my left, I spot three deer, nibbling
daintily on a manicured lawn,
white tails swishing.

How many drivers missed those
small movements and mistook those lithe forms
for three of the plastic mannequins
that dot the tamed lawns of this neighborhood,
the real dismissed for the expected?

I slow, crawling by while the deer
attend to the green shoots.
Rolling down the window, the humid
summer air mingles with
the cold, stale air produced
by the air conditioning
and they collide on my skin.

When did we start believing that fairy tale

 that we could leave Eden?

Friday, September 8, 2017

Original Poem: A Romantic's Take on July 20, 1969

I'm always trying to put more original content on this blog, but it's often tricky time-wise for me.  I was going through some things I wrote for my creative writing class last year though and came across a few pieces I was proud of, so I'll be posting those within the next few weeks.


A Romantic’s Take on July 20, 1969 by Larissa Banitt
A girl in a cotton dress and cat eye glasses
sits cross legged on the floor,
a copy of Jane Eyre clutched across her chest.
She’s staring at the moon
Through her grainy, rabbit eared television
and thinking of the trope in stories of lovers
torn apart from each other by fate
who look at the moon and find solace
knowing wherever their beloved is,
they have the same moon to look up to.

She wonders if the families of the men
On her screen have that same solace now.
Knowing that if they look up to the moon,
Not only will they know their loved ones
Will be looking at it too (between their feet),
The families will be gazing right at them,
though their distance makes the men
smaller than specks of dust.

Her parents start when her book
Thumps on the floor, Her hands
outstretched on the carpet behind her.
They ask if she’s ok, but she only nods,
Too embarrassed to say she suddenly felt
Like she had peering into the
Grand Canyon last summer,
As tiny and insignificant as a grain of sand
Next to the expanse of the ocean.

She lays in bed that night,
With moonlight casting shadows
across her quilt and decides
That love stories would be much more tragic
If they took place among the stars.



Monday, July 13, 2015

Review: Ugly People Beautiful Hearts

Title: Ugly People Beautiful Hearts
Author: Marlen Komar
Page Count: 96
My Rating: 3.5 TURTLES: A very enjoyable read, I recommend you check it out.
*The author provided me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review
Ugly People Beautiful Hearts on Amazon




I'd like to thank the author for sending me a copy of this book. I don't review a whole lot of poetry. I have read a fair amount of different styles and authors as well as written some poetry of my own, though, so I know a bit about the genre. 

The way Marlen Komar formats her poetry is rather avant garde. It is a mix of prose poetry and free verse, one poem would be one block of text, the next would be separated lines like I normally think of in poetry, the next would be a mix. I thought it was a really interesting presentation as it allowed her to really emphasize a line if it broke away from the rest of the test. Also, Komar's imagery is just beautiful. She has some really unique ways of describing things so that I could just picture what she was trying to convey, but never would have thought to say myself. Those lustrous lines of imagery were my favorite part about this collection.

Poetry is kind of a hard thing at least for me to rate since the rules are very different. I'm not judging world building or character development or even grammar, really. A lot of it just came down to personal preference. One thing that is completely a preference thing is that many of the poems were about the speaker addressing a lover they were no longer with, but it wasn't clear to me if it was the same lover in each poem, or if each poem was focused on a different scenario. I wished there had been a bit more variation on the subject matter because sometimes it felt like the different poems were part of a larger one or there would be images that would repeat with slight variations, but didn't feel intentional. Again, all very much personal preference.

I would certainly recommend this book to fans of poetry (Although, you don't have to read poetry exclusively to enjoy Ugly People Beautiful Hearts). Komar's voice is fresh and unique and I wouldn't be surprised if we saw more of her in the future.



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Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Spotlight: Idealism is an Attractive Flower


 
Gold Winner in the 2015 Feathered Quill Book Awards Poetry Category



This book contains a collection of 87 individual mixed-media works combining original poetry and photography by Oneida Morningstar Cramer.

Idealism is an Attractive Flower on Amazon
Oneida Morningstar Cramer

Sunday, November 23, 2014

Review: Chasers of the Light: Poems from the Typewriter Series

Title: Chasers of the Light: Poems from the Typewriter Series
Author: Tyler Knott Gregson
Page Count: 144
My Rating: 3.5 TURTLES: A very enjoyable read, I recommend you check it out.

Description:
The epic made simple. The miracle in the mundane.

One day, while browsing an antique store in Helena, Montana, photographer Tyler Knott Gregson stumbled upon a vintage Remington typewriter for sale. Standing up and using a page from a broken book he was buying for $2, he typed a poem without thinking, without planning, and without the ability to revise anything.

He fell in love.

Three years and almost one thousand poems later, Tyler is now known as the creator of the Typewriter Series: a striking collection of poems typed onto found scraps of paper or created via blackout method. Chasers of the Light features some of his most insightful and beautifully worded pieces of work—poems that illuminate grand gestures and small glimpses, poems that celebrate the beauty of a life spent chasing the light.

Review:
When the publisher approached me and asked me to read this poetry collection in exchange for an honest review, I was thrilled. My blog does not focus on poetry, but I love it and have dabbled in writing it myself. When I first got it I flipped through the pages and adored the look of poems printed on found paper and his photographs are absolutely stunning. I love that the art of his poetry is that it isn't just the words, but the format as well. I also thought that the poems he created from blacking out all but a few words from old books was really neat and produced some beautiful results.

This book was really close to a full four stars, the art of the formatting I just talked about were almost enough to get it there by itself. Even as I'm writing this review I'm still a bit conflicting, but I'm going with what my impressions were as I was reading this collection. There is no doubt that Gregson is a beautiful writer, his poems have a sort of grace about them, but it is the subject matter that I think weakens some of the poems. The collection is not labelled as a collection of love poems, but that is what the majority of them about. I really enjoyed the few that were not love poems, and enjoyed the majority of those that were, but some of them felt a bit too much like they were saying "you're the only one I'll ever love, I can't breath without you". I'm sure some people find this incredibly romantic, and if I'm sufficiently brought into a story where I think those types of words would be appropriate in a story I wouldn't mind. they way they are presented in some of the poems just seemed a bit overly-dramatic to me.

Overall, this is a beautiful book, the type that I'd leave on a coffee table for visitors to leaf through, or that my alter-ego who runs a coffee shop and cafe would keep in her in-store library. Tyler Knott Gregson is certainly up and coming in the contemporary poetry scene, and I would definitely recommend that you at least check out his Tumblr page where he posts his poems individually. I think it is partly his merging of old and new technologies that makes him such an intriguing artist.


Chasers of the Light: Poems from the Typewriter Series on Amazon